the stakes of TGDP ep.1

ok so i went on youtube to seee what mstakeds i did and made a list of them(4 no reason). Ill do my best to not hav them is ep.2

1. Retarded and stupid sound effects.
2. wrong transistion(in ep.2 there will be a new one)
3. lags!(now fix'd)
4. misspeling
5. wrong launguage on youtube part.
6. bad faceposing
7. schort movie, long credits.
8. music breaking
9. bad timing intro.
10. stupid ideas.

and now what will be fix'd in ep.2
1. now that i hav CGF sape i can use the sounds 4from games like tf2.
2. i will be searching hours 4 th right sound.
3. ill take my time on it(the first one was made in rusch)
4. i reseted fraps so now it records nicely.
5. the intro looks good.
6. i wont write long ceredits but make more ideas(the first one had only likfe 7 clips, ep.2 had 12)
7. i inprowed the transistion. it will look diffrend then the first one but it wont suck)
8. ill triple-check the render 4 mstaked.
9.etc.